Within the crit, we were each given a couple of minutes to introduce and explain our concept and design before posing any question in which we would like particular feedback.
As I had not yet managed to begin the production of my final outcome, this was the main area I asked the group for feedback on and the issues relating to this such as the stock I should use and the binding process.
Another area which I asked for feedback on was the layout I had chosen for my final outcome and its appropriateness for the concept.
Feedback:
- Think about Binding - Spiral binding would make it appear like a schedule
- Consider stock in terms in terms of price - May end up being quite expensive
- Consider front cover and colour of stock
- Think about type and consistency I think the main type works but the smaller font doesn't really fit
- Maybe have more obvious areas where you can write
- Maybe also duplicate some of the pages - As I always change my plan
- Give room for people to cross out things out
- Maybe put horizontal lines to assist writing?
- Not entirely sure about the layout - It's not obvious how you move around the page throughout the week
- Very good idea but seems very simple - Could you have something to accompany it?
- I like the colour coding and how it helps you to lead you throughout the course
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