Feedback from Dan
- Important to include all ideas, even if it's just written down - to talk through, presents a more rounded project.
- More important to show ideas than have finished outcomes
Hoax
- Interesting visual identity - doesn't look like type, pattern of some sort? - Could be applied to a variety of outcomes.
- How would it work overlaid James Vicary's pieces as a poster etc.?
- Think about way finding
Isolé
- Similar to an institution in Switzerland or Bauhaus - Something to look into?
- Nice identity and concept
Home Comforts
- Good concept - hit the nail of the head
- Different houses work well, reflect the concept - could be pushed
- Expansion into advertising?
- Unique individuals - playing on the idea that everyone is different and would have a different idea of what makes their house their home
- The concept could be communicated more
Knee's Up
- Nice identity
- Triangle has been rolled out well across the outcomes - continuity
Interactive Mailshot
- Don't worry about personal identity too much
- Mailshot is an engaging way too contact individuals
- Very reflective of me
- Sent one over to them?
Cockney Rhyming Slang
- Nice idea
Bearman
- Wouldn't necessarily know it was for a lawyer
- Perhaps try a more tongue and cheek approach - more unusual, more memorable
- "You scratch my back, i'll scratch yours"?
- "Animal in the boardroom"?
York's Yummies
- Nice illustration, more engaging than type - look at shapes
- 'Y' could be incorporated into the illustration - make a pattern?
- Extend the project? How would signage work?
- Play on the relationship between the sandwich illustration and the 'y'
Square One Enterprises
- Again there is the possibility for extension
- "start from square one"?
- Make the square illustration into a 'o'
As Music is primarily a branding agency I also decided to talk Dan through my latest project, which is not in my portfolio just yet.
I am currently working on branding for a Zoo, I have decided to branding three different elements of a zoo - the cafe, gift shop and ice-cream stand and have created three different animals to represent each; a generous bear for the giftshop, a greedy tiger for the cafe and cool penguin for the ice cream stand.
I explained that I would to the opportunity to produce a really unique and engaging set of branding guidelines and therefore presented them as he story of each animal.
Zoo Branding
- Could still be pushed further - think about the interaction between the animals and human
- Make more personal? - Stories could be told in first person by the each animal
- Play more with the characters - Way finding / menus
- Zoo's are mainly targeted at kids - really play on this
- Good illustration style
I am really glad that I attended the portfolio review at Music, being able to talk through each of the projects in my portfolio with a professional from the industry has really improved my confidence and is something which would be less daunted about in the future.
All of Dan's feedback was also really useful, not only was he able to offer a fresh perspective on projects he also offered up many ideas and possibilities on how projects could be improved or extended and seeing the way he thought and would approach the brief enabled me to the same and come up with more developed ideas and there a couple brief I would like to revisit and develop following his feedback.
We reconvened in the meeting room at 1:30 pm where Dan took us though a presentation explaining a bit about Music, what they do etc. and take part in a question and answer session.
Music
Studio consists of:
- 2 Big Cheeses
- 3 Head Honchos
- 1 Wordsmith
- 3 Pixel Wizards
- 8 Wanky Designers - Seniors and Juniors
- 1 Crafter
- 5 Negotiators
- 1 Administrator
- They tend to hire people who are adaptable - can turn their hand to anything
- Small agency
- No specific discipline or style
- Because the World is Round, it Turns Me On - Book produced and sent out by Music, creates business from likeminded clients
- Building a strong relationship with clients is an essential part of developing as a creative
- Understanding the fundamentals of the problem
- Get used to presenting / writing presentations
- Hanson Frank - Illustrator Agency
- Internship Programme - opportunity?
In terms of the studio itself, it was quite a large open space with smaller meetings rooms and kitchen as well as a roof top terrace which were all invited up to for a drink at the end of the day. Not only was I really impressed with the space which is somewhere I could see myself easily working in but the environment was really friendly and relaxed atmosphere. We had been allocated a smaller meeting room which we were able to work from during the course of the day and again similarly to when I spent the day at Basecamp I found working from a professional environment really productive.
Everyone in the studio was friendly and helpful particularly Ed, another senior designer who invited us over to look at some of the pieces he had been working on which was a real insight to the average working day at the studio. Dan had shown in the vast array of projects and briefs they work on and Ed explained that this mentality that they are not necessarily pigeon -holed to just Graphic Design or Branding made it difficult to get bored.
He also gave us a bit of background the recruitment process explaining that typically their juniors have a years experience.
Music is definitely somewhere I would aspire to work at in the future, I admire the fact that they don't restrict themselves in terms of projects or ideas which is something I being concept driven want to achieve with my practice.

























